You Picked Her

by Raychel   Dec 8, 2005


She's got the looks,
The blue eyes,
The Blond hair,
And I'm left behind as the one who cries.

She is what you deserve,
Of course I'm not.
I'm not that perfect you see,
I'm just not that hot.

She's polite and respectful,
I'm rude and disobedient,
She'll always stay true to you,
And, well, so would i but...

She lives life without a single flaw,
I'm always screwing it up,
She's as perfect as a porcelain doll,
I'm that nasty chipped cup.

She must be perfect,
to obtain your love,
I'll never, *no way in hell* be that perfect,
So it's me you don't love.

Go ahead,
Love her.
You already picked her.
But i know that you wont be sorry,
That you left me in the dust.
Crying.
Alone.
Without you.

Because you picked her.

~plz comment ill return the favor~

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  • 16 years ago

    by Brandi Ingram

    I loved it!!! That describes my problem right now.

  • 18 years ago

    by Matthew A.

    Good and sad at the same time. Sorry if this is true. Hope you can get through this and talk to you later.

    ~Matt~

  • 18 years ago

    by Switchblade89

    And what nathan said is true...someone being too perfect is dull because you already know things about them...it's when your different that makes things intersting to learn about...escpecially when your spontanous....okay...i'm done..
    lataz

    Robert Flores

  • 18 years ago

    by Switchblade89

    Very sad poem...I know how that feels..in a way...actually that same thing has happened to me like eight times to me already...but thats okay..what doesn't kill you makes you stronger right? ...sorry...i'm stupid...well very good poem none the less...hope to read more.

  • 18 years ago

    by Nathan

    Hey I liked it a lot. especially the crack of the porcelean doll. I dont agree with the moral of the story though, as perfection gets boring and old quick it's the quarks of imperfection that binds true love

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