by Biscuit Dec 8, 2005
category :
Life, society /
about society
Is there no conscience in this world? |
by Sole
Heh - I hope your teacher was as shocked as I was . . .your words are straight to the point and honest. Completely blunt - it works! War is blunt too - blunter even than this poem about war - which is powerful because of the bluntness of it. Which leads me around in a giant never ending circle. Excellently written. |
by Tara Kay
You are talented, i love your poems |
by azlan26
Wow powerful, the World really can suck sometimes... |
by Busted Halo
Hey! Very good! I agree 100%.I have a poem along those lines. If ya wanna check it out its call Chivalry is dead. |