Hey! Very good! I agree 100%.I have a poem along those lines. If ya wanna check it out its call Chivalry is dead.

Wow powerful, the World really can suck sometimes...
"But what all is it for?"
Very true, sometimes
Kee writing :D

You are talented, i love your poems
and this one was no exeption
x

Heh - I hope your teacher was as shocked as I was . . .your words are straight to the point and honest. Completely blunt - it works! War is blunt too - blunter even than this poem about war - which is powerful because of the bluntness of it. Which leads me around in a giant never ending circle. Excellently written.

Peace. [Sole]