That was not a dream!!!

by Boy   Dec 8, 2005


I am tired and close my
eyes and i see a dream
an amazing world i see
i am alone between the
fields of fragrance flowers
where sun shines and birds
are flying away together
i can see every thing
around me is so beautiful

the perfume of air with
amazing care attracting
me here i can see some
mountains that are far
from my eyes and
behind them the sun rise

as i walk i see a girl is
singing a song with her
tongue O what is she
singing in amazing
language i want to
know a little basket
of flowers in her hand
and she is plucking
the flowers in this land
i want to find where
from voice of song is
coming

at last i see the girl
a silver crown on her
head her clothes is red
she is so pretty her
golden and bright face,
brown hair black
shining eyes,
attract me

O what is she singing
i want to know she
is still singing and
start walking her
soft voice attracts
me and i follow her
she is going towards
the mountains
who is she? i m thinking?

she stops near the river
i come to ask her
\"who are you\" still quite
she is! and smiling, says
me to go across the river

how beautiful her wooden
boat and how beautiful
to sit in front of her in
the boat she is rowing
the boat who is she?
who is she!! i want to ask!!

but i am completely fell
in her beauty and in her
deep eyes and we
reached across the
river but who is she?
It was surprising me!!
she is so pretty she
takes my hand
i start walking with
her again
where she wants
to make me go?
how I ask her how?

who is she?
i am still confuse
there are many
routes now i see
the different world
a door with cover
of different flowers
as i entered i see
the wondering world
behind that door
there are many
little rivers and
green grass
tall trees, cool
breeze, shining
sun where i am?

at last a girl come
near to me and
says â??this is
heaven a paradise
you were die
â?? Oh i am not in
dream i am dead
and now i m in
heavens i say to
myself now I am
in foreverâ??s life
she says right!!!
Here everythingâ??s
seems so bright
she smiles she
is the virgin of
paradise

this world is so beautiful
i have to live here
I should go where,
there or there?
this is foreverâ??s
life she says she
lives with me now
i have to live here
God sent her for my care

how this world is? ,
i donâ??t tire and walking
still i see some other
peoples they are all young
as we taking each other
hands in the paradise
land we are still
walking far and
very far i see
amazing gardens
covered with different
fruits There are many
routes

how this world is
different than
previous? There
is no hates!!
there is no gait.
There is no fight!!
how much this
world is bright!!
every thing
seems so right!!

as i walk with virgin
of the paradise i see
a palace a palace on
the river, that was
amazing i surprised
i want to go there as
i think for go there
and try to go. why
i cannot move
more why i cannot
go there
why my foots donâ??t
want to make me
go there then

i listen a voice
that voice of God
he called my name
and says wait the
palace is not my place
and here my boundaries
of land is end as i look
up i ask why?
voice come and
i listen this palace
for that person
who did more good
Works in their life

at last i found that
the palace is not
for me the border
of my land,
is where i stand
i am looking the
great palace
again and again
and i think
if i would be in
previous world.
i would do more
good works for
see that palace
and more behind
the palace

Paradise girl is with
me we are
wondering free
i m happy in
this foreverâ??s life
everything is bright

I sit here and
i wish with care
that i would tell
the people of
Previous world
to do more good
works in their life
and this work is right

how this world
is bright
and forever life
awe every thing
seems so right
this is paradise

please comments and votes please!!!

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  • 17 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    It's a good poem but I like your other poems better - sorry xD I think to improve this you need to put more punctuations :) it flowed well, good job

    Keep up the good work ^_^

  • 18 years ago

    by Cyma Khan

    Gr8 poem
    n everythg in it is worlds biggest truth

    God bless u

  • 18 years ago

    by Boy

    Good work carry on!!!!