Real nice. I liked it. Sounds like true feelings to me. Maybe you should tell this person how you feel if this is whats really going on... but then again im just some random person on the internet.

Great poem =]
Your an excellent writer
Keep it up

I love this poem. It has to be one of the best love poems I have ever read. I can soooo relate to this poem and I'm sure that many others can. I really like the line, "yeah that's me I'm holding on to someone I no longer know." That is the one line that reminds me of me and a guy I have liked for about a year now. Yet, no matter how many times I've cried over him, I just can't seem to let go. I love it, keep up the good work!
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Hey gurl! I love all of your poems. They are really great. I can relate to your feelings and your problems. you can e-mail me anytime i would love to talk to you. Keep up the good work and good luck in life.