Daughter and Father

by james22   Dec 8, 2005


Dad when i woke up today i saw you crying
why your crying ? i asked
he said don't worry baby I'm fine, i say, why you lying ?
he said its nothing, go to school, enjoy your day
as i walked to school i started to wonder whats going on
thats all i thought of, I'm practically speechless, i don't know what to say
as the day goes by, my friends notice something is wrong with me
they ask whats wrong ? i just say its some family stuff
what kinda family stuff they ask, i say don't worry, just let me be
its not finally the end of 6th period, I'm happy, school is out
but all of that changes when i step out the door
i walked out and say my dad, he tells me theres something we need to talk about
we got in the care and he says, moms been a car accident
she was hit by somebody who lost control of their car
shes in the hospital right now but shes in bad shape
I'm just amazed, out of all the news I've heard, this is the worst by far
so i say to myself, no wonder he was crying in the morning
now i have to step it up, i have to be a tough girl, i have to support him
after that, there was nothing but silence
but that changed once when we got to the hospital
me and my dad were standing there
holding my moms hands while shes fighting a battle
the clock hits 9:23 pm, as you can tell we have been there for hours
my dad tells me it was a hit and run accident
one word came to mind, that word was, cowards
and right after i say that final word, we hear a flat line
we both turn to see my mom, shes gone, but its not her time
i yell at the doctors, DO SOMETHING, BRING HER BACK
all they can say is I'm sorry, SORRY, that doesn't do me good
i just think, damn cant believe shes gone, just like that
i look down to my mom and say i love you mom, goodbye
as i said that, i heard a whisper tell me its not a goodbye
in time we will see each other, tell you father theres no reason to cry
i lived a good life, i was blessed with a perfect family, its now daughter and father time

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  • 19 years ago

    by Spitfire

    Omg
    thats amazing
    its great
    it made me sad
    good job
    is it true??
    5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by yaRis

    Thanx for ur comment on my poem ONE WISH but i like urs better =)... well yeah dat poem was from a personal experience all my poems are someway or another but that was way back in 99' OLDSCHOOL lol! u are really sweet and thanx again ciao...

  • 19 years ago

    by yaRis

    Ola James first of all i wanted to say WOW. You left me spechless (lol) with all your poems. I so far have read this one, Sit there, Do you ever, I love you I love you too, beautiful brown eyes and ur last one on ur poems list love. Is like once i read da fist i had to read a next and i kept goin i was hooked 4 real. U have such a talent for writing is amaizing. Ur poems are like lil stories and dat's hot. I love ur work 4 real. I put u in my Fave poets cuz i wanna come back 2 ur poems and read them all... U deserved sumkind of an award for best writng u trully should...Well plz plz plz keep writing such lovely poems and ill be sure to read GREAT JOB... take care n stay sweet....adios: =)