Comments : **Why?

  • 18 years ago

    by yaRis

    Awww great poem i liked it and funny thing is dat same questions i ask myself... n like u i kept them all in. i love this part u wrote:

    You know he's not for you,
    but what should you do?
    Do you let him go?
    Or do you reach for what's not true?
    So much desire, yet so much pain.
    I don't think love's suppose to be this way.

    I loved it 5/5 no lie ! keep it up ciao...=)

  • 18 years ago

    by ashley

    Wow this poem is really good..i really enjoyed reading it ..you wrote the emotion really well. i will look foward to reading more of your poems

  • 18 years ago

    by jewels18

    Awesome i love it but for some reason i can never ryme

  • 18 years ago

    by Spanish Star

    Great poem. Expressed exactly how I am feeling at the moment. Keep it up:)

  • 18 years ago

    by Lost & Delirious

    This is another beautiful poem, I think what makes it beautiful is that it's so sincere.
    You love someone that you don't want to love, so that's really confusing, that's what I understood. That's a feeling that I'm used to and I think that you're poem expresses it in an amazing way.

    Good job! 5/5

    Keep writing.