Life Sentence

Very emotional poem, you expressed you feeling, pain and sadness excellently. You wrote it in interesting way. i don't like few lines, but all in all this poem is very good.

I am glad you had the strength to make a change. What a sad and heartwrenching story. Thanks for sharing.

Such i deep meaning only a select few would trully understand about. well done. i loved the emotion in this poem.

the ending i thought could have been a bit stronger. but still well done again.

5/5 David

Wow... I'm sorry to keep praising you on your sorrows... but you have a talent... keep writing. 5/5

Life is a matter of perspective. There's always light at the end of a tunnel.

Amazing poem! I love the fact you have told such a powerful story in so few verses. You are very talented x