Wonderfully written. I am sending this to my sister in the hopes that she will choose to make a change in her life. I'm afraid she won't though. Stay strong.

Excruciating! memories will last forever but the pain goes away...

Nice work with this one... it is well written and well thought out... i personally liked it and i'm going to read some more of your poems and add you onto my favorites list... nice job!

sammie

Awww this is so sad, i hate to live like this, keep up the good work

Great poem, well written and so expresive

It was so good i liked it alot.

Woh - a serious poem with a serious talent. I am sorry for the content but I appreicate the talent you have for writing. I only wish that one day you are set free =)

Wow this was really good and really emotional! Im sorry you have to go through with this! I gave you a 5/5 :))

It sounded very strong, simple but dark and it left me with a kind of tingle up my spine. That marriage can do that is cruel.

//Truest Lies//

Wow that is sooo sad...is anybody that u loved on life sentance or somethin cuz thats what it feels like...but the wordz that u used got to me and i have to say that u are a wonderful poet...5/5

Excellent poem. Very sad. I'm so sorry you and your children had to go through the abuse of your ex-husband.
5/5 forsure.

Tiffany.xox.

Wow... speechless. im just sorry you had to go through that. you'll get through it, keep your head up high.
you have my prayerz. 5/5

Much Love,
BX Girl

Wow.. beuatifully written. had a lot of depth to it. i like how you didnt desribe it too much into detail because it gives us readers room to think what you meant. awesome piece! =) great job;)

-emotionless19

Very weii written the pem gets the pint accross

Well that was one of the best endings I've read to a poem on the site.

Amazing poem! I love the fact you have told such a powerful story in so few verses. You are very talented x

Wow... I'm sorry to keep praising you on your sorrows... but you have a talent... keep writing. 5/5

Life is a matter of perspective. There's always light at the end of a tunnel.

Such i deep meaning only a select few would trully understand about. well done. i loved the emotion in this poem.

the ending i thought could have been a bit stronger. but still well done again.

5/5 David

I am glad you had the strength to make a change. What a sad and heartwrenching story. Thanks for sharing.

Very emotional poem, you expressed you feeling, pain and sadness excellently. You wrote it in interesting way. i don't like few lines, but all in all this poem is very good.