by sammy jo Dec 8, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Behide the smile |
This was fantastic! I know how it feels to pretend like everything's OK..when it truly isn't! |
A powerful and sad poem, well done. I hope you do not mind a bit of critique, it would be nice if you broke up your poems into stanzas. A stanza of 4 lines to a verse, it would make reading so much more enjoyable for the reader. |
by missy
Great poem!! loved it, soo true. Nice work, keep it up! |
by Ashley
Hey this is a very good poem it reminds me of well me cuz that is how i am and it sucks. |
by Melissa
Very deep! I love your words and feel every one! |