Very powerful, yet sad. I truly hate poems like this. Not because they are not good, just because the message they relay is so down. Remember that things are never as good or bad as they seem at the moment.

Keep writing.

Very deep! I love your words and feel every one!

Hey this is a very good poem it reminds me of well me cuz that is how i am and it sucks.

Great poem!! loved it, soo true. Nice work, keep it up!

A powerful and sad poem, well done. I hope you do not mind a bit of critique, it would be nice if you broke up your poems into stanzas. A stanza of 4 lines to a verse, it would make reading so much more enjoyable for the reader.

Warm regards,

Steve

This was fantastic! I know how it feels to pretend like everything's OK..when it truly isn't!
i loved your poem and thanks for pasting this! 10/10!
keep Writing!