Nice poem 5/5 nice use of words real deep ...

You're not crazy, we all feel like this at times, i sure know i do, but there is always SOMETHING to live for. Focusing on that helped me get through my hardest times. no matter how small or insignificant, there must be one little tiny thing you would miss if you were to leave. so hang in there.

wonderfull poem, great rhyming pattern, and the repition in the first stanza set up a really good rythm. it was deep and full of emotion, a really good piece of art.

keep writing,

thanks for the comment

xstrange angelx