Awesome job. it was great

Awww thats is so amazing. I really liked it. there is so much emotion and pain and i can really relate.

Wow...excellent!!! this is absolutely breathtaking. i love it!!! keep it up.
-xXx-

Very nice write... it was a truley excellent poem and just to put im simply amazing.... keep up the good work...

sammie

OMFG pickles *tear tear tear tear* omg! that was one of the BEST poems I ever read! thats so sad! i love it love it love it LOVE IT! keep it up

Wow...that was agian i say one of the best poems i have ever read
~0~bubbles~0~

I dunno.. i dont reli hv words for this poem ryt here.. so ill go with the usual.. this is amazing.. lol.. its not just one of those sad songs and poems that just talk about nothing and everything at the same time.. lol (wich i do write:P) this is something.. ur rhyme scheme is gr8 and u managed to keep up the rhyme maintaining ur flow and not making it seem forced.. this is so true.. i can relate tho in a different way (is there such a thing? :P) hehe
but anyway.. this is reli gr8.. wonderfully written..
keep it up
take care
NannO

Tht woz so kool i relli lyk it ur relli gd at rhymin stuff and actually makin it make sense n ful of meanin. well dun :D

Wow! just wow! it's sooo amazing !!!=D