Judgment Day

It will be a normal day, like any other
you may be drinking, talking or joking with your brother.
When a minuet fells like a day
when your whole mind is lifted away.
When you feel something is not right, you have a bad feeling,
like this time your wounds wont be healing.
Only you can feel the evilness coming,
when there is a banging in your head, but nobody's drumming.
You feel dizzy like your whole world is spinning,
because your playing a game with the world and you aren't winning.
You want to sit on the floor,
and get up never more.
So you sit and wipe a tear from your eye,
you remember your life and begin to cry.
Siting and thinking of all the years,
of all the sins then you simply break out in tears.
Thinking of what you have done to your family and friends,
pondering if this is really the end.
So you stand up and peer outside,
and what you see makes you run and hide.
It's true, for what you see,
is the Apocalypse coming, you fall and plea.
Then you fold your hands and you pray to god,
you pray it's not true and he will smile and nod.
Your mind is playing tricks on you, you're not really here,
this is all a dream and all your friends are near.
Then you pray some more, you will be more nice,
after all of this you think you have payed the price.
A gust of wind blows , a bible opens,
this is a message from god is what you are hoping.
You approach the book, a new verse, you read in fear,
"The end is coming, but Judgment day is here".

hello. my name is Christopher Wayne sagriff. and I'm 17.

i wrote this when i was 14 (almost 3 years ago) for a writing contest in school , and i got last place.
now i know I'm NOT a super writer, ( my spelling is really bad) but i don't think i should have got last. so vote and review this please and tell me what you think

p.s i do she will read this but *Victoria* (with stars-*)
thank you so very much