Comments : Why should i live why should i die

  • 18 years ago

    by Courtney

    This is a great poem i give ya a 5/5!!! keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by Green M&M

    I think this one is goos too

  • 18 years ago

    by Princess09

    Good poem, very sad!! Capitalize all 'I's and the first word on each line;)
    Toodles
    ~~Sweetie

  • Wow...this poem has alot of emotion in it and i loved it...5/5 is all i have to say...

    and i would appreciate it if u would comment and vote on my lates one...i don't feel like goin back to the forum...thank u in advance

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    A lot of emotion is held within this peice, and expressed very strongly to make a very well written powerful peice of poetry.

    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Once an Angel

    Questions without answers are never fun to deal with, but that is why we live, to find the answers, to learn, to grow and to gain understand. Never surrender to uncertainty, fight through it and survive it's enticing power.

    -Tainted

  • 18 years ago

    by Arcane Blondie

    Really like this poem---its so true how there are so many questions in this world eith no answer---

  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle18

    I really enjoyed reading this poem! it has alot of emotion.. great writing.. =]

  • 17 years ago

    by Dark Kitten

    I didn't exactly enjoy this poem very much. It was short to the point of where it seemed you hadn't given any thought at all. The repitition in it was the biggest problem though, and it would be alot better if you described why you are thinking this way. I know you can do alot better!