If Only (Suicide/Depression)

This is one fantastic and very thoughtful poem. The melancholy of the verse was duly enhanced by the structure, the repetition of key phrases and an excellent diction.

I am impressed by your talent, you are certainly one excellent poetess.

Awww...This is so sad and I loved it . You never cease to amaze me . It has
a nice flow to it and it's well worded .
Haven't heard from you in a while, so
I decided to check up on all my fav's .
Keep up the good work Sweetie

Love ya
Letty

Amazing poem...i can really relate to it...thanks..

Heya,thanks for your coment on my poem,iv just read this and i think its brilliant,i can realy relate to that in so many ways.so people are just oblivious to others pain.great job.take care hugs and kisses mich x x

THIS IS GREAT ....Ireally like it, its sad to.....You're another poet to add to my favorites list.

P.S. you forgot to vote on the poem you read....thanks for the comment though.....xoxoxo