by rrrrrrr Dec 9, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
These secrets werent meant to be told, |
by LostSoul
Lol? I agree with Darkened Heart's first comment and I agree with ZephyCloud this poem does contradict itself in one of the verses. |
by Fugi Andisfather
Hardy...har...har...glad you didnt think that comment was harsh |
by Klumzy
This poem contradicts itself. Therefore it results in not making sense. Nice try though. |
by Fugi Andisfather
Heckuva lot better than the first one, but unidealistically conradictory for the first two stanzas ( i love that phrase) |
by yaRis
NICELY DONE =) |