NICELY DONE =)

Heckuva lot better than the first one, but unidealistically conradictory for the first two stanzas ( i love that phrase)

This poem contradicts itself. Therefore it results in not making sense. Nice try though.

Hardy...har...har...glad you didnt think that comment was harsh

Lol? I agree with Darkened Heart's first comment and I agree with ZephyCloud this poem does contradict itself in one of the verses.