I love it-- what movie inspired you??

Great poem, it flows very well and the story coes together very well.

5/5

It works very well indeed..the rhyming was great, and I also liked the snazzy words, and the story--it was dark and almost made me shiver, which I think was what it was supposed to do.
Great work!

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Simply amazing!!
every poem i m finding too good.

right in my fav list...u go!!

will surely read all of ur poems...day by day..to make this journey never ending..:o)

take care

Hey that was a pretty good poem
i liked it

Steph, You are a winner! Lol. congrats, you just won yourself 3 comments.

firstly i'd like to say it was exactly my kind of poem. i'm really into the drak stuff so this was beautiful to me. i especially loved the ending. very kool.

rock on, Suzie

I rlly enjoyed this one. another grrt piece of work from u! thx for ur comments! keep up the awesome writing!~sore

Wow, excellent. i love it. the poem made perfect sense to me.