by Void
Alright! lol it is a weird poem, infact I don't quite understand it, but with poetry and writing - you're expressing feelings. And if you're feeling confusion or random or not feeling a thing, than to have your readers feel the same thing through your room is great! It shows you know what you're doing. lol even though it doesn't look like it. Nice job, I loved the weirdness --- uniqueness ;) |