That was really good. I can connect to love poems easily most of the times, but especially this one at this point in time. It was really good, but (and no offense I only want to tell you my two cents) some of your lines are off count (rhythm) so they don't work as well as they could. But, well that's just hard, I don't even have that completely down. Anyway, good job, I really enjoyed it and felt every word.