That's pretty good.

Real awesome poem; what you said is so true! people who havent' been through hell and those who have put u through it will not understand! really good poem!!!!!!

Great poem... it really got me thinking... its like a note about a note... so good.

Thats's better than pretty good. The honesty of your work - to me - is so refreshing. I gotta say I love the whole idea behind this, the title,.. everything. I really can't explain it more than that except truth resonates the strongly, transcending any barrier.. I don't have any critiques but the last line seems a bit choppy to me and could prolly benefit from revision. Specifically, what I think I'm talking about is the 'note-less' part.. I like the implications, just not the the sound of it so much.. OoO well.. once again, beautiful piece of art.. =O)

I lvoe how you chose to write this...amazing workk.

Lissa

This poem is really good ... be proud of ourself ... it's really fluent and has a nice beat and everything ... keep writing ... 5/5