I really like this, I love the image of a burnt white feather, I can see that really clearly. Love the way this poem flows and is exaclty the right length to carry the message gracefully. Beautiful write.
5/5
*VioletRaven*

Wow - this is so symbolic. I love it! I'm always looking to see what you'll write.

You're on my favorites!!!

Great and solid work.
Aweosme concept, over all it was great.

xoxo
Matt

Wow. I love this poem. Very well done. Incredible. Wow. So beautiful writin. I'm impressed =) Keep up the good work, you are very talented!

Done Geez
ONly took me an HOUR!
Merry Christmas Suz
see you tonight
love
Em