Comments : Life

  • 18 years ago

    by firexflys

    Nice job with saying how u felt this poem is deep nice job keep it up 5.5

  • 18 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    Beautiful!! A truly romantic piece and so heartfelt. I enjoyed the read and could really feel the love and passion. Well written.

  • 18 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Absolutely Beautiful Bill. Touching piece.

    Love Ann

  • 18 years ago

    by Karla Gordon

    Sweet, passionate and very beautiful!!! So very touching!