I adore this, I can tell you I've felt the exact same way many times before, you did a wonderful job stating it clearly and full of emotion.

Damn!! right in my favourite list...thats where u shud be...

u r an amazing writer!!

Very nicely written, Melissa. Great poem.

This is a great poem. I could imagine how you felt while you wrote this. Keep up the good work!

Wow! i like this! thanks for comenting xx

This is really good. really. i connect with this so much cuz this is how it is with me and my hubby. thanks for commenting on my poem. 5/5. keep up the good work.

I am glad you left this page to read.

This poem is undescribable. i love the words and i love how you incorporated your feelings into this poem. great job! ;D 5/5 and thanks for commenting on one of my poems.

Absolutely amazing. I love each and every one of your poems. This is astonishing. You fill me with awe, at the beauty within every delicate line. xx

"all I'm ashamed to be"

That line hits like a punch in the face. I'm also lovin' the ending lines, just wow! Keep it up....

Wow this is great. i love it. i can feel the ...feeling? lol. no but seriously this is great. i esp love the last line. its just perfect