"I'ts always me to paint the picture green."

Its the little clever lines woven into the bigger poem that made this warm to me. Well written...come give me some tips...

[lostlaureate - come find me]

Seriously impressive, mixing two different length stanzas - I loved it :)

Great poem. weel written, keep it up
xxxxx

Great write, very well done! FLows together and good use of vocabulary. Keep up the awesome work! 5/5
~Luvz~
~Angie~
xoxo

I love this poem. I'm not really sure why, either.

The message you're portraying is extremely powerful; i think many readers can connect with this piece because we've all had to venture from our comfort zone at one point or another.

Truly, i did enjoy this.

Aww that was beautifully well written, with a feeling of deep sadness in the words. I loved it. I could feel every line with a spring of emotions. You express everything so well and uniformly that your poems reach some sort of triumphant perfection. Keep it up! 5/5

I love freeverse!!!!
Ahem
I know how you feel, I've lost so many people who I miss dearly and some more to come

A beautiful poem to say the least

:)

Amazing word choices and great descriptives. I think this is a fantastic example about how the right words can make or break a poem. Different words saying the same things couldn't nearly shine as well as this does :)

Biscut --
Wow, this is such a great poem! I would definitely miss my best friend if we were to be seperated. The flow throughout the poem was perfect, and the not rhyming added kind of a nice twist. Overall, it was a really great poem. Don`t change anything about it, I loved it! 5/5

Love Much,
Samantha Hollywood

Very good portrayal of emotion! I really liked this. It was quite original as was the other 2 poems of yours I read. Keep up the good work!

~BJ~

Oh yet again. Nicely done poem. I really enjoyed it. Keep up the wonderful work Hun.

That was another nice written poem! loved how you put all the emotions in it!

Excellent job. loved your word choices