In The Darkness, Sparkles

by Biscuit   Dec 9, 2005


Blow out thy candle, pray, sit by me,
lend me thine eyes to observe the night
by the light of the moon which shines upon thee.
Look! How the stars are twinkling bright
and the night, in the darkness, sparkles.

I beckon to thee, child, rest at my side,
hush now and taketh a moment to glance
at the dance of the shadows, so handsome with pride.
Hark! At the song of the raindrops trance
whose glance, in the darkness, sparkles.

Witness the beauty, and peace afore us;
a black silk blanket covers the sun in a sleep
so deep. The glittering clouds sprinkle their dust
on the crystalline curtain from whence we creep
To peep, as the darkness sparkles

(age 16)

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  • 18 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    This was very well written i loved it

  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda Bee

    The language was superb, the flow was terrific, the imagery was magnificent, the beginning was wonderful, the ending was even better...

    Overall it was ehhhh, okay I guess.

    (JOKING! This poem was marvelous! I love your style.)

  • 18 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    AWhhhh that's really sweet. I liked this one aswell. You write very well. :]

  • 18 years ago

    by ShhhhItsASecret©

    Awww, this was such a good poem. I like your used of old english. It was very well-written. You have a lot of talent. Keep it up! 5/5.

    ~BJ~

  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Oh my god... This is my favorite of yours hands down. I love the olden day language so much... It really stuck out to me and is just gorgeous. A great poem.. The way you describe things and just everything came together perfectly.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

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