Beautiful poem. Great imagery rhyme scheme and flow. Good message, that people should just stop and look around at al the beauty in the world Keep up the wonderful work.

Gr8 flow of this poem..and gr8 message...i luvd this poem! 5/5
~*Who Cares?*~

I like how you used "old fashion words" like thee. It really made the poem stand out from the others on this site.
Great job. 5/5

Awesome imagery, well written, formed well and a good read overall
well done mate
love Tara-Kay

Superbly written, great use of imagry and vocab thoughout. it holds the readers attention very well and seems to almost have an atmosphere surounding it as you read

5/5

Aww the languega in this is really well crafted
Your right, darkness is more beautiful than light, because you can really take in nature instead of the industrial mess

Beautiful ... full of great imagery and your choice of words was splendid. A joy to read.

Very nice. I liked the references to things shining that accentuates the title.

The glittering clouds sprinkle their dust
on the crystalline curtain from whence we creep
To peep, as the darkness sparkles

These are my favourite lines as I love the mental picture they create.

Wonderful use of vocab and imagery. Simply amazing. I have no criticism for this poem.

Oh my god... This is my favorite of yours hands down. I love the olden day language so much... It really stuck out to me and is just gorgeous. A great poem.. The way you describe things and just everything came together perfectly.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Awww, this was such a good poem. I like your used of old english. It was very well-written. You have a lot of talent. Keep it up! 5/5.

~BJ~

AWhhhh that's really sweet. I liked this one aswell. You write very well. :]

The language was superb, the flow was terrific, the imagery was magnificent, the beginning was wonderful, the ending was even better...

Overall it was ehhhh, okay I guess.

(JOKING! This poem was marvelous! I love your style.)

This was very well written i loved it