Comments : Land of make believe ..::wait there for me::..

  • 18 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    Ohh wow, this was the most beautiful, sad and amazing poem I have read....God this made me cry...You write in such a special and unique way hunni and your poems always take my breath away...Love it as always =0) just PERFECT...

    Love Sabrina

  • 18 years ago

    by Mona

    Wow. You know, to be very honest now, I actually never really cried while reading a poem. Often had tears in my eyes, but never really cried. But this poem.. oh wow.. you got me crying here.

    IT's beautiful. I 'really don't know what to say.. I'm so dam impressed. It's so dam powerful. So beautiful writin. Wow.. What a wonderful poem.

    Well done.
    lotsaa love
    -xxx-

  • Oh my god, this poem is so sad, i am deepy touched. it's beautiful. one question, is this happening to someone you know, or were you just inspired?

    so sad, but so beautiful.

    5/5. i am getting my friends to read this too.

  • 18 years ago

    by Alixia

    I really liked the title.
    It caught my attention.
    I loved the poem.

    Alixia

  • I really love dis poem huni its so good and full of emotion, u r really talented! i love the twist! plz comment on my poems it would mean a lot! luv ya

  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda

    Thats really good :)

  • 18 years ago

    by abi

    Wot a beautiful poem!

  • 18 years ago

    by yaRis

    Wow that's really deep n so sad aww u even made me cry... 5/5 amazing work =)

  • 18 years ago

    by patrick smith

    Beutriful poem, very sweet and very sad. im gonna post a link to ur poem on my blog, coz its such a dam good 'un.
    pat

  • 18 years ago

    by Rena

    Hey. i understood that. it was amazing. every word fit perfectly into the story!

  • 18 years ago

    by яock godеѕѕ

    Wow...that was really great keep it up... check out some of my poems.. Nat

  • 18 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    Oh...icic...cool poem...got it now, very good indeed, it's really sweet. I love it.

  • 18 years ago

    by eternitySOlong

    Very symbolic and dreamy. I don't know what else to say. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Sean

    I love u. these are so good.