Aww joee...your not alone! You know im always here for u, and thats how its always going to be.
Love u lots,
Neha xOx

Aww, im so sorry joe. I know wot u mean. i just lost my boyfriend, my best friend n im losing a very close friend to me aswell n many of my other friends too. it was a really good poem. keep it up.
becca x

Joe, I would coment more if only I could see thru these tears of mine.... I can relate to this one also.... I hate it when ppl leave and they forget about yoiu cause of there new friends.. When I was pregnant w/ my daughter, I lost what I thought was my best friend... She didnt wanna hang out w/ me any more cause i couldnt go out and party..(Iwas 18 @ that time) but you know what, I showed her that I can have as much fun w/ or w/out her.... O.K... I could go on and on, but I wont... You can always talk to me about things. Remember now, I am 28...LOL..... Luv ya, Kim

Oops ...... i gave it a 5/5 cause it has feeling in it & it is hard for a man to show his feelings...

Awwwww hunny things will get better i promise just gove it soem time if ya ever wana talk im always around loves ya lots crimson-pain xxxxxxxxxx

Pretty sad poem.
-Ashley

Awwww...Joe this is so sad. I have lost many good friends over their new ones so I can relate. It's amazing how times can go by and to see that people walk in and out of it. But just try and think that true good friends are the ones that leave footprints in your heart and that if your friend is one of them than he will relise how much you mean to each other and will let nothing change between you two even his girl. Great poem and you know I love your work. If you want to talk Im here for u. 5/5
xoxoxJulie

I like the feel of the poem. It expresses an lonelyness most people feel

Awww... Joe this is sad. Ive lost many friends aswell. But you have me as a friend even and even tho we cant see each other. You'll find more friends your a really great person. I love your work... and I cant wait to read more.

Much love DevilsAngel
AKA Kristie

Good poem. Sorry it's true. Friends come and go. I am 33 so I know. Go with the flow and branch out.

good luck

Joe, Joe, Joe, Joe..Aw, I would be a friend to you. :D I'm sorry no one has been a good friend towards you, i'm actually suprised at that..you're a nice person. Well, I hope you have many people you can talk to and be friends with them.

-Jennifer.

Overall Rating: 4/5
(I don't rate poems a 5, so getting a four is like giving a 5 in my book)

Seasons Greetings!

I like this one its so true (even though my friends havent left for collage they are all moving) my family cant afford christmas this year so we arnt really doing any thing (same as the last three years) but i hope everything gets better for ya

*katie*

This is so sad....But it's wonderful....You have you're xmas wish, because you now have a friend in me ...keep up the good work 5/5

I'm sorry bout your friends but it could be worse remember that, and it's a blessing really because you get to see NOW that this friend is not a true friend and you can find better friends, rather this happen now then whe you truely need one! I'LL BE YOU FRIEND!

I have an idea. Send this poem to all your friends that have left you via email or mail(email is way more effective), maybe you will find out that they feel the exact same way. Also, I am very sorry that has happened.

Hey i really like this one cuz i can relate to it in some ways. if you need a friend or someone to talk to just talk to me ...

Another good one your a good writer

I kno how that goes n it sux.. but i like how u wrote it its really good

Hey I know what its like to feel like that. The greatest friend that I have is God..then my boyfriend..I did have a girl best friend..but we kinda fell apart after 5 years of friendship. It kinda hurts...But Im looking for some new friends to help me through. Great poem..keep it up!

Considering most of these comments begins with 'Awww' or the like, I'll try a different approach. Don't be hard on me - But I think that the poem should be judged as a poem, and not because you feel sorry for the poet. So . . the poem was absolutely amazing.I think that you structured it well, and the last section is very powerful. Now . . onto you . . . If you want to talk to a friend, just pm me, I'm sure we have a lot in common xD.

Peace. [Sole]