by Fallen~Tears
Great poem.. sad though.. ive been there. and am going back to that place.. i have 1 friend and my twin sister.. pathetic i know.. |
Wow i really liked this poem and i can start to relate all my friends are going all over the U.S. for colleges and its just gonna be me left and maybe 1 friend or so after i graduate..so its not gonna be too fun |
Woh! That's tought loosing all your friends and then knowing you will loose your best friend... it seem's even all of this is going on you seem to have a strong heart and it seem that as well as a sincere person! Wished I could have been there for you... cuz I alway's value my friends even when they move apart we still e-mail each other.. well any ways I loved the poem. It was a great write! |
by Lisa
Such a sad sad poem of turmoil and loneliness, we all have times when we are alone but it allows us to ponder on what we've done in life and what we can do to change what we want to change...so look on these times of loneliness as a time for growth. |
Awwww how sad i felt like this 4 such a long time |
Awww i know the feeling joe. i've lost many friends for different reasons. good work. please keep writing!! |
Hey im sorry you felt lonely its a good poem though lol . ~♥~ |
by Marjan
I guess that’s a cold feeling we all have felt at times. |
by Sweet lig
Ohh now im so emotional,, coz this is really true! there are times we feel alone but i have to tell u that u are not all alone.. i believe wherever u will go u have an angel always by ur side.. and there are some people still care for u.. well i think and im sure this kind of poem it helps u to heals some or ur heart aches that u can not say to others..so just keep on writing coz the way u write or ur feels the way u can feel free! excellent and perfect5/5 |
by Hatori
This is a really great poem. Especially the aspect of it being true. Your wording was very good and how you described the emotion made me (the reader) think and feel what you might have felt. |