by hghschl_babe09 Dec 9, 2005
category :
Life, society /
faith, religion
I'll be your light |
OMG, that is so good, although I'm not a christian, but you make it sounds like life, I don't even know you wrote it as Jesus talking, well, it's good, Matt is right, you are good. |
Very good poem keep up the good work |
Very good poem...I like it...especially the ending...kept me thinking...well hope to read more. |
by Matthew A.
Good. Like the fact that you end your poems in a way that people want to read more. Nice job. |