Good. Like the fact that you end your poems in a way that people want to read more. Nice job.

~Matt~

Very good poem...I like it...especially the ending...kept me thinking...well hope to read more.

Very good poem keep up the good work

OMG, that is so good, although I'm not a christian, but you make it sounds like life, I don't even know you wrote it as Jesus talking, well, it's good, Matt is right, you are good.