Very dark, but I like that because it was so short you had to put a lot of meaning into a few lines...I once wrote a similar poem, about a subject that wasn't so deep, but it wasn't received very well...

I liked this one, though.

-beth

Short but great all the same as if it were 5o stanzas in length. it was great and full of emotion i greatly enjoyed reading it
~HazE

Soooo true love it :)
robyn