by forever-tourtured-by-crimson-pain Dec 9, 2005
category :
Friendship, family /
broken friendship
Is she lieing or is it true |
DAMN GURL!!! I LIKE |
by Stabbylou
I like this, it's a bit erratic and choppy but to me that suits the emotion behind it, awesome poem! keep writing xxx |
by NeoDaDevil
Quite impressive, but really work on the words, it would really sound sweet if the lines were sinchronized and kinda melodious |
I like this poem because it shows how much your best friend hurt you..and shows how much you really want her to know that she hurt you..has emotion...keep writing |