I like this poem because it shows how much your best friend hurt you..and shows how much you really want her to know that she hurt you..has emotion...keep writing

Quite impressive, but really work on the words, it would really sound sweet if the lines were sinchronized and kinda melodious

I like this, it's a bit erratic and choppy but to me that suits the emotion behind it, awesome poem! keep writing xxx

DAMN GURL!!! I LIKE