Freedom

by RadianceInReverse   Dec 9, 2005


Why
is life so hard
that I don't wanna breathe
and sadness is the only thing I see
Escape
is what I dream of
freedom from the hate and pain
is something I want to gain
Searching
everyday, for the one I love
for the right way to explain
the fear I have inside of me
Relief
from the everyday life
of tears and scars
put into golden stars
Peace

You guys liked the new format so well that I'm going to write more poems this way...Please Comment..Joclyn

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  • 18 years ago

    by ryan39

    Loved it, fabulous very good

  • 18 years ago

    by Matthew A.

    Like the format still and hope you write more, oh yeah nice poem.

    ~Matt~

  • 18 years ago

    by Switchblade89

    Your writing like this is really intersting....I was wondering if I could write one like this...and since you started it I thought I should ask you first....well hope to read more.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lenee.Roca

    Aww.. i liked it.. i can relate.. to the whole thing!! awesome job!