I like this song. I can understand it and connect with it. I wish I had more to say, but, I don't.....with songs; it seems you enjoy it, or you don't [without much reason to defend your admiration or dislike].

Hotness song! man, i tried writing a song and it didnt come out all that. this ws great!

Wow again i love it really goooooddddd you are an excellent writer never stop

Great writing. i loved the words and the way they just fitted together. very unique idea and so brilliant. 5/5

That was really good. i enjoyed it. keep up the good work.
Emma 5/5

I know i have commented on this 1 already but this one got you 1st place in my contest so congrats i love how it is a poem but also a song you are an awesome writer and i will be looking forward to more of your poems

congrats again and again!!

I thought this was pretty good... i love the comparison of life to an hourglass

"Like sand kisses the sea goodbye,
The mist betrays a tearful eye,
Like a falling leaf will be gone,
With loosened grip we will hold on"

that was beautiful, descritive and just so pretty. the words you ued were ones not too over used and that was nice to see

i noticed your comments on sum of my work, thank you for that =]

This song is amazing.
Wish I could get the tune of it.
Bet it's good!