Lost pieces

by May   Dec 9, 2005


I almost told you today-
How I really feel.
but I've waited so long;
I had to be sure it's real.
After so many heartbreaks,
and so much pain,
I can't risk being torn open again.
You've given me hope,
and, I must say it's nice.
To tell you the truth,
You are a broken heart's paradise.
I'm falling for you;
I'm falling quite fast.
I almost dare to hope,
that a while we'll last.
I"m trying so hard to forget the past..
The first guy that broke me,
did it very well.
I think my heart is mending-
But there are many lost pieces,
it's so hard to tell.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Ruthie

    Really beautiful! *grins* loved it. very unique 2 i loved how u opened and ended the poem... really great work darls! .... thanks 4 the lovely comment btw! :D

  • 18 years ago

    by sara lynn

    I like the opening line a lot.... it is really good... it grabs you right into the poem....

    "I almost told you today-"

  • 18 years ago

    by TinyDancer46

    Wow... I'm so glad you wrote another poem, I've been waiting for you to =) This is amazing, I hope that things work out, cause you deserve someone incredible! Great poem hun

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