Pretty good, alot like felings ive had for guys, nice job, i love how much i relate to yiour stuff... 5/5, later!

This is a great poem that's different, but everyone can relate to!! I love it! 5/5!

Great Poem... I'm sure a lot of people can relate. Everyone has had someone like this in their life.

I like the poem, the message is clear.
I have one suggestion to make it easier to read, and make the rhymes stand out more *bear in mind I am an amature, you don't need to take what I say seriously*

If you have a rhyme, and you finished it, try skipping a line maybe. That way the next lines flow brilliantly.
so for instance if you have this:

I didn't know what it was three years ago when you first came in to the class, but I felt a desire for you that nobody knew would last, I don't think you even know how I feel, or if you do I doubt you think what I'm feeling is real, my feelings always returns for you no matter what I try, I say that "I don't like her", but I know thats a lie

try doing it like this:

I didn't know what it was three years ago when you first came in to the class,
but I felt a desire for you that nobody knew would last,
I don't think you even know how I feel,
or if you do I doubt you think what I'm feeling is real,
my feelings always returns for you no matter what I try,
I say that "I don't like her", but I know that thats a lie

take care,
~*TasH*~

Very nice poem, well written, and just plain an simple good! 5/5

Aww thats really sweet. the wholeliking her for 3 years... i reallylike it its definately worth a 5/5!!

Good write, natasha does make a good point though! I liked it, it was sweet and sad! 5/5

This is sad in a lot of ways. It does make little sesne in some parts but other than that it is really good.

Isnt that cute

Awww....This is so sweet and a little sad . I really like this poem . I know how it feels to think someone's into you, and then end up finding out that it must have been your imagination . I'm sure I've told you this before, that you are a very talented writter . I look forward to reading more .

Keep up the excellent work
Letty

Cute and sweet and sad! keep it up!

I really really loved this one ,, so much in deep n emotional, i would give this 5/5

Wow, this is FABULOUS! I'm so flattered about what you commented, thank you. This is a very nice poem.

SUPER GOOD! i liked it alot! great job [[=