Oh my gosh... I'm speechless. This is a perfect poem. The rhyming pattern and flow is flawless, and I loved the way you wrote it. Fantastic job hunni!! =)

This is good, hunni very good indeed...hehe, bye bye babe, gonna miss you!!!

OH MY, This is breath-taking, literally took my breath away, the last verse "I'll be waiting my love,
As I've always been the same,
I'll hang onto you,
With a heart around your name.
" wow wow, you are amazing my dear, do you have a book published? I would like to buy one with all of these, they're fantastic

Cuteness love it :) love you too
sammi xxx

This poem is just simply beautifull,its so perfect it just breathtaking. 5/5