Aha! Now this.. is what... I .. call a GOOD poem.. This... is... PERFECT.

You made.. the time "stand still" for me, to think. And because I have read this poem, I realise that " I " am standing still.. but the time.. is moving on. YOu gave me a whole other vision on time... Thank you..

Thank you, for sharing this. IT's deep, meaningful. It's excellent. I love it. Keep writing please!

Take care,
--xxx--

I like it