Perfection is a lie.... that's all I can say. I've tried and God is it hard to get away from being someone I'm not versus being me :)

Great poem. well eritten and structured, and so true about prefection been talked about but never obtained.

Wow.. nice job with it.. i wonder bout that a lot too and i agree with that par in ur poem where u sed:
"Would the world still be so great
If everyone were perfect
Or is it the imperfections that make people so great"
i thot about it a lot over the past year, got to the same conclusion "its the imperfections that make u perfect" yea, it sounds weird, but im writin a poem bout it, wen im done, maybe u cud read it and get wat i mean.. :D
overall,ur work was reli gr8 and full of thoughts
keep it up
NannO

Wow i really liked this poem... there was a lot of thought put into it... and thats what i believe made it work so well.. to answer your question i believe perfection is boring.... so no the world wouldnt be better with everyone perfect.... so yeah... beautiful poem and extremly well written... keep it up!

sammie

I liked this poem alot, it really made sense and had alot of thought put into it.
I like your style
Tara xxxx
Thanks for the comment on mine
much appreciated

I think perfection really depends on who is seeing it, and when.. nothing will stay perfect forever.
there will be perfect moments, but nothing is always perfect, i realized this 2 weeks ago.

funny thing... i just wrote a poem called imperfection :p

Thought provoking is the phrase that comes to mind. That and well structured. There was thought behind it. Flow was well done. Good job.
~DFTI

OUTSTANDIING