The Babysitter

by Juls   Dec 10, 2005


Mommy,
Last week I got a new babysitter
you said she was one of the best
she would take care of me
while you were gone.

Mommy,
You said I would have alot of fun
but I still needed my 2 hour nap
Today I meet the babysitter
she was very nice
She gave me juice and cookies
late at night

Mommy,
I was having so much fun
until I fell on the ground
I started to cry my knee hurt bad
She looked at me and laughed
she told me to shut the @?!* up

She grabbed me when I didnt stop
She shook me hard till...
she heard a snap

Mommy,
The babysitter shook me so hard
that she snapped my little neck
She was too powerful
I was a twig compared to her arms

Mommy,
You said I would be safe
but look at me now
My little body is lying in a wooden casket right now
Lifeless and without a sound

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  • 18 years ago

    by Evie Tracey

    Wow that is a very good poem...you are an awsome writer

  • 18 years ago

    by Brigitte

    Wow, It sounded exactly like the words that a child would use... some people go into touch detail with things like this...things that a child would never really say... but you made it sound as if it really was... You did a very nice job on this one! Keep up the good work!

  • 18 years ago

    by t. h a l l i d a y *

    Wow ... really deep... you can actually feel like ur standin there ... wow really good

  • 18 years ago

    by Jerrys¤baby¤girl

    Thats sad...... good poem tho.
    Love Always Tiffany HEather

  • 18 years ago

    by swill

    Omg im crying...its so so so sad
    i msorry
    please find the strength to be strong...
    u'll be in my prayers...
    dhaval.