by Juls Dec 10, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Mommy, |
by Evie Tracey
Wow that is a very good poem...you are an awsome writer |
by Brigitte
Wow, It sounded exactly like the words that a child would use... some people go into touch detail with things like this...things that a child would never really say... but you made it sound as if it really was... You did a very nice job on this one! Keep up the good work! |
Wow ... really deep... you can actually feel like ur standin there ... wow really good |
Thats sad...... good poem tho. |
by swill
Omg im crying...its so so so sad |