One: Awesome poem gret flow/structure and diction. two: wicked nick name:P lol keep it up hun im trying to gett off my ban so bare with me and ill comment when i can

Jenn

Wow, Awsome poem. I loved it. great flow. keep it up.

~Joe~

I like this poem and if this really happened i am so very sorry that your dad did that to you and i'm glad you saw that poeple can be very decieving(sp?) but i liked it 5/5

Outstanding job, this poem had a lot of feeling in it.This poem is sad and I could feel the emotion as I read it.