Hey dalr. i liked the struvutre. a heartfelt piece. thank u s0 much f0r the c0mment 0n mine. meant al0t! =)
l0tz 0f l0ve /d0ra

This was beautiful!!! Girl this is exactly what i'm going through right now....except i let him fall through my fingers..........but it was beautiful!!!
luv jess xoxo

Hey, good job. thanks for the comment. And if you want to be with him, don't try to let him go. Everyone's scared every once in a while..

heidi

I really like that poem.. it's exactly how I feel about this one guy. great job.

Wooow, another great poem! really know what you mean with this one, 5/5! read and comment on some of my other poems too xx

Hey! I like it! Keep up the good work!
God Bless you!

P.S.Thanks 4 the comment. :)

BEAUTIFULLLL!!! exactly what i've been tru.. know how you feel/ must have felt,, stay strong girl xx

G r e a t poem. Related to me alot, reminded me of my exboyfriend (ex as of today). i see true talentttt. whoa thats cheesy. oh well, great job!

Omg, i love this poem!! it's so beautiful and it relates to me so much! great job =)

I REALLY like this one its strange how people thats are sooo different feel the same way, well thanx 4 the comment
*katie*

Ok I def like this one too! well done, keep it up!

I kno how u feel...im going though tht rite now...and hurts 2 feel like tht peson doesnt love u like u love them...even when they tell u they do love u..it hurts not 2 believe them...i like ur poem

Wow! That is me... amazing and well put! it is a beautiful piece! and thanks for the comments!

I thought i was in love with this guy and then he moved away. I felt like this, but since then Ive found my TRUE love and we've been together ever since. We're inseperable. True love is the greatest feeling u can ever hav. Never let it go xxx Keep up the great work. You're an incredible poet.