A great dedication. A good choice of words and beautiful poem at that!! Very well written. Though the end of some stanzas goes on a bit long, it's why I like it so much - keeps you gripped! Great work :)

So beautiful... are you trying to make me cry??? I sit here reading all these wonderful poems and my kids wonder if mommy is having a break down with all the crying lol

Touching poem....this one hit home with me, almost a year ago I lay in the hospital near death.....beautiful write my friend. I am so impressed with your poetry and wisdom.

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^_^ Great poem...really sweet and beautiful. It's a really touching poem, it almost made me cry :-) Take care and thanks for sharing.

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I love this poem is great. and thanx for ur comment it just made my day better

That was really nice nd touching. i loved reading it. keep it up dear
bharti

Very good poem
goodluck

Very precious and touching, beautiful words.....

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

This poem rocked! I could feel the love that you would have for your muse.

Ohh I love this poem. It's so beautiful and romantic... you did an excellent job with this, you should be proud =)

Beautifully written poem. I appreciate the way you explained your need and for her in a simple but very powerful way. I will be reading more of your work.

That is probably the sweetest poem ever! i love the structure!
XoXo allison

Beautiful poem.... its adorable!

This is a great poem.
I am so jealous.. u are a good poet... so are a lot of other poeple on this site. I am congratulating u....

What a sweet little poem. =)

The only think I can say about this poem is the formation is a bit scattered. I could't focus onreading much, because of the formation. Once the oem got through though, I was certain you are a man in love.

Good writing.

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Good poem, i must say it was well written. looks like u have so much love for the one your in love with. which is great. keep up the good work.

Amother excellent write! The flow of your words mixed with the feelings creates a vivid image of the deep love you have for this special woman.
Again awesome write!