Such an impressive write with an excellent end which is so cute. This is my new fave poemy by you, because of its deeper meaning.You perfectly reduced the theme to its most important aspects which I loved. The structure is new to me, but it was definitely a great plus for the intensity of emotions in that poem. |
by Karla Gordon
I love this poem. It is written very well.. I tried to write one similar a few days ago but yours in much better. You got across what you were trying to say much better. Thats my feelings as well. Rich is not about money or possessions but valuing with your heart what you have. I am very rich with my two girls.. now I need a sweet, passionate and loving man. Know any spares??? lol |
by Bill Turner
Beautiful poem and I couldn't agree with you more....but I used to be just the opposite...funny how life changes us. |
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by TinyDancer46
Wow. I don't even know what to say about this. It's amazing... and it's so true. The richest man alive is the one who has found love, happiness, close friends and close family. Great job, you really hit straight to the heart with this poem. |