Final good bye

by I.Lose.It.All   Dec 10, 2005


Dear Dad

When I see you I wanna cry
I wanna go to my room and die
After all u put me through
Did u even know what u were doing?

When u started I was 3
and even now u still try
always wanted me
told me it would be worse if I flee

now I'm 16 and cant take it
ill do anything even throw a fit
do you even care
if u did u wouldn't’t dare

what would I be like if that never happened?
Would I be good?
Would I be bad?
Would I even be as sad?

Only you have those answers.
So dad this is the final good bye.
And remember I loved you.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Alessandro

    Hey Jen

    This poem is excellent, you are pro at this, but dont be sad for ever, i love it when you are happy.

    Love Sandro

  • 18 years ago

    by stolen_lyfe

    Hi Jenny,
    I can kind of relate to this poem if I knew what it was about. I sort of have an idea but, I dont want to be wrong about it and than feel bad. So I'll just say you write with your heart and soul. -hugs- Keep Writing Always!

    always hugs forever love,
    Care

  • 18 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    Good job on the poem, it was at times left me in the dark. i wondered a lot of things. I think it is really good thought. Very well done, i just felt that you could have went further with the poem.

    Five

  • 18 years ago

    by I love anka - rooney !!

    Nice poem great work keep it up!
    hope its not true

  • 18 years ago

    by Sharayah

    This one is really sad but i liked it alot!

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