Aw wow, I dont think this poem needs a title first of all it is beautiful on its own, i love it, the words are so pure and sweeet, well done, keep on writing hun take care

Awww this poem is amazing i think it was written perfectly and describes love greati know how it sis to love someone this much

lots of love
*~*Becky*~*

Awww this poem is amazing i think it was written perfectly and describes love greati know how it sis to love someone this much

lots of love
*~*Becky*~*

Adorable.simply adorable. i wish this would happen to me.

AMAZING ASH! AS PER AS USUAL! 5.5

MARIELYS

Very enjoyable - it has a nice rhythm and you can see the natural talent. Keep writing. =)

Sometimes we just can't name things, or use a few words to describe feelings...
i guess you don't really need a title, its really sweet and touching as it is... :)
but just a thought... if you had to describe in one word, which would you choose??

i'd choose, undescribable...

anyways.. 5/5 :) its really great when the one you love helps you back up when your down... but right now me and my boyfreind are so down, so scared, neither of us can get back up or even talk to eachother... maybe when we find out if hes ok.. i hope he is :/... i don't want to lose my everything >.

0hh that was s0o beautiful! i l0ved it. great use 0f w0rds in this. such a great p0em! l0ved it! keep up the gr8 w0rk!!
l0tz 0f l0ve /d0ra

Oh, wow, excellent poem! i loved it! 5/5. um, for titles why don't you try love... your the one...i love you. i don't know, maybe some things just can't be named.
**lisa**

Hey, thanks for the comments... I dont get on the computer much to add my new ones.....I really like dthis poem and cant wait to read more of yours...well keep writing!!

DAMN I REALY LIKE YOUR POEM ITZ REALY TIGHT WELL KEEP UP WITH THE GOOD WORK AND THANKZ FOR STOPING BY WELL I HOPE I HEAR FROM U SUM TIME WELL THAT ALL BYE................ALWAYZ,**~**R0$I3**~**

Your great at writing love poems!!! This is wonderful!!! Keep up the great work!!!

Great poem. So sweet. I like the quote at the beginning, it's one of my favorites!! Excellent job.

Tiffany.xox.

The opening lines drew me into this poem straight away and the flow and emotions kept me going throughout.

Keep writing
Nici

(as for a name if you can't think of one, maybe it doesn't need one)